Baris was happy with the changes I'd made to the storyline - I made it less of a straight forward linear format, whilst also cutting out a few scenes that feedback told me reduced the momentum of the story.
This has the positive effect of lightening my workload, meaning I have a bit more leeway with regards to the subnission date.
Baris noted that the relationship between the two characters may need a bit of expansion. He said if the audience watch the film and when the girl breaks up with the boy they think, 'what a bitch!' then that's good, that's what he wants me to achieve.